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[Game About Game Literacy]

when i first played this i didn't realize there was anything past the fake ending, now i played it to the end, definitely worth it

[Corvus/Corax]

fantastic game

[AXUO]

it's kind of hard to get into right away, but i think maybe i'll come back to it once every so often to see if i can get a bit further, it has that kind of appealing depth to it while still remaining a simple to grasp concept.

Pizzamakesgames responds:

Thank you, that's nice :)

[In or Out Dating Sim]

i liked it

[Sheepy]

i didn't get it at first, it kind of started too suddenly, but somewhat interesting concept

AlexGoldring responds:

Alright, we'll work on it, thanks for playing :)

[Iron Sunset]

interesting

[Bus Driver 2D Experience Rush]

i loved the little effect for the title screen, as well as the sound effects, but the rules were very unclear, and the art was very plain for the actual gameplay.

[Maryse]

with what the last person said "less pixelated", i can't really say that's really accurate, it's more about figuring out what you want and like and sticking with it, and iterating on it. i liked it, a more interesting concept and clearer aesthetic than the first one. for making games, you'd be better off using a game engine or code library than just plain actionscript

[End of the World]

"Your, just like anyone else's, mission is simply to survive."
i don't claim to be a writing expert, but that sentence is super-clunky.
this would easily be fixed by changing it to this
"your mission, just like anyone else's, is simply to survive," though that's still very clunky.
the look of the monsters with the shadows is neat, as well as the shadow behind the character, which is a nice touch but overall, as it is the game would be better described as a visual novel than a point-and click adventure, though genres are kind of restrictive, and maybe you should't desribe it as anything.
an interesting first attempt